Plagiarizing (Spring break HW)

1. What the student did wrong was that he took the material from another person and used it as his own without giving the author any credit. What he could have done was quote the site he got it from.

2. "There is a peaceful essence flowing from the structures. Perhaps the cool dark colors and the fiery windows spark memories of our own warm childhood years filled with imagination of what exists in the night and dark starry skies. The center point of the town is the tall steeple of the church, reigning largely over the smaller buildings. This steeple casts down a sense of stability onto the town, and also creates a sense of size and seclusion.To the left of the painting there is a massive dark structure that develops an even greater sense of size and isolation." as stated in the article A Brief Understanding of the Starry Night Paintings.
http://www.vangoghgallery.com/painting/starryindex.html


3. To avoid plagiarizing you can 1. site your source 2. paraphrase it 3. write in your own words 4. quote

My thoughts on reading responses (Spring Break HW)

I really like Joyce’s blog about how Peeta and Gale are different and Aiden’s blog about being ‘unwound’ and all the characters different opinions about it.

One reason I liked Joyce’s article is because she kind of gives her own opinion about it. She states “I have fallen for Peeta ever since I read about him”. Basically she stating if she were Katniss she would go for Peeta instead of Gale. I like that she did that because if make the audience reading her blog get more into it and sparks ideas in their head about the same things.                                                          
 I also like how she gave reasons why she liked Peeta better then she liked Gale. She also made it really brief getting right to the point which is something I love about blog posts.

I really liked Aiden’s blog post because I could tell he put a lot of time into it. The wording was clear and to the point. He also explained what the story was about. It was really helpful and gave me a clear understanding of what his blog was based on. 
“In the book Unwind by Neal Shusterman, abortion is illegal until the age of thirteen and cannot be performed after eighteen. When they kill the child, they use its organs to give to others in need, so they are "technically alive". This is called being unwound. In this book, three characters called unwinds because they are about to be unwound. Even though the three unwinds have the same fate, they all think of it differently.  Connor is determined to get out of his situation, Risa wants to run away but first feels hopeless about it, and Lev is a tithe; born and raised to be unwound.  Lev feels it is his divine duty to be unwound.” is what Aiden stated.
Overall I really liked Joyce and Aiden’s blog because they both were clear and I feel I could do some of the same things as they did by giving background information like Aiden did or/and add my own opinion like Joyce did.

Much to do about nothing review and thoughts

I recently saw the play much to do about nothing with my class 810. One thing I really liked about the Shakespearian play is that the stage was small and close. it was like I (and the audience) were just spying on the lives of the people in the play. I felt really connected to the play and the characters. Plus you really got to see the facial expressions of the actors and it was really good.

I also noticed that the setting in the play was different then I original because in Shakespeare it usually takes place way back but in this play it took place in the 20's. You could tell by the music, the costumes, props, and dances. I also think the story line of the play was in a way really confusing. At some parts I was literary lost and found myself asking a lot of questions about what was happening in the play. But i did get the overall sense of the story, partly because the two guys came into our class and told a us a little about what the play was about, before we went to see it.

Overall I think this was a good decent play that was funny at some parts and confusing at others. But I would like to see it again to get a better understanding of it.

Mockingjay; reading response

This is the second time ive read mockingjay and i chose to read it again because of the moviewe are going to see and ive noticed a lot more. In Mockingjay by Suzanne Collins, I think Gale is heartless towards Katniss, although he acts all fuzzy and warm. I think he says he loves Katniss, but at the end of the book, I think we have enough reasons to think that he is heartless.
For one thing, when Katniss and the Rebels attack the capitol with bombs, and Katniss’s sister Primrose dies, it is most likely although he says it isn’t, the bomb that he and Beetee, another engineer, were working on to destroy the capitol.
Another reason is because at the very end of the book, he leaves to go to District Two, and Katniss assumes that he’s in love with some one else, even though he was the one competing with Peeta for her love, and he was the one who said that she would choose the person who she couldn’t survive without.
I wonder what happened when he supposedly dropped that bomb on Prim and the other Rebel medics. He was the one who promised to take care of Prim when Katniss went off to her first Hunger Games. And the Rebel medics and medics-in-training were on his side! So wat could have happened to the feelings inside of Gale. His bomb destroyed thousands of allies and the most important and loved person in Katniss’s mind. He must have known that Katniss would be angry with him if he used his bomb on people that included Prim. I know I was angry with him.
In conclusion, I thought that Gale was very heartless at the end of the book. He acted like he didn’t even love Katniss anymore. Very heartless.

Romeo and Juliet: what character i like/ feel is important

Once character that really stands out to me in the play is Mercutio,Romeos cousin. I really like his tactics and feel he is more unique then any other character in the play. He takes things in a different matter, he really cares about Romeos well being but at the same time he's being forceful. He makes demands that romeo must follow to help Romeo overcome his heart brake.
here is a letter i think Mercutio would write to romeo if it was little more modern

Dear Romeo
You cant let love keep you down. you need to get back in the game, find a new lady. There are plenty more fish in the sea that you can chase after! I'm sick of seeing you moan every 5 minutes. You got rejected so what, you cant be depressed about this one girl forever! And if you ask me, she wasn't even that pretty...
There is a party soon and you should come...scratch that I'm MAKING you come. Some things need to be decided for you, im not going to let you be a party pooper! look i know you are going threw a really rough time, but who knows you might find the love of your life at the party! Meet me at the corner behind the market we'll meet there. we. are. going. to. that. party!!!!!!
Love Mercutio
I also think Mercutio will play a bigger part in the play then people reading the book might expect, he seem like a more violent type of person and it seems like he would do something devilish as long as it doesn't hurt Romeo and his fragile heart.
He is also not a Capulet or a Montague which in my opinion makes him a bit more special then other characters because it allows him to roam in both houses,
Over all i really like him as a character and in my opinion he's the most interesting person in the play!!!

Romeo and juliet

Dear Friend

The most important observations I’ve made so far about the book is that the montogues and capulites hate each other, and as we all know this is going to affect the book greatly.

Shakespeare so far is really complicated, I feel like in order to understand an piece you need to read it over more than one time and try to read it out load, and I would recommend asking a teacher for help because it can get really confusing with all of the language.

I also wonder why the two sides hate each other it’s never been made clear to me.

What i Think About ´´A Sonnet For Stephan´´

It’s safe to say we´ve all lost someone or something very important to us, but no matter what we will never forget about it. i feel like this is what this poem is mainly about. This sonnet tells the story of a young boy who was like a son to him who turned into a strong young man. Went to a very good school and was building a very strong future for himself. But there was one thing that stood in his way...sickness. The person who wrote this probably felt deeply about this person and was greatly affected by his death. So he wrote this poem as a way of saying good bye.

In the first stanza it says ¨ I see a little boy of four or five whose face lights up whenever we would play Who made me feel it’s great to be alive and wish that time would never tick away¨

This is stating that he was really attached to Stephan, and it made him feel new and good. It made his life seem like it couldn´t get any better. And I can relate to that. Sometimes when I’m with my family and friends and I’m having such a good time I never want it to end. I remember when I was in Costa Rica and we were surfing and we would catch huge waves laugh and have a good time I never wanted it to end. That’s how I think the author felt when he was with Stephan.

I also think this was a way of the author saying goodbye because of all the effort and emotion put into the sonnet. I fell like the author chose the most meaningful words and put them together in a way that really touched hearts of many people. From the looks of it he wanted everyone to know how he felt about Stephan and how important he was. One part that really stood out to me was the last lines that read “The boy, The youth, The man are each now gone

Except in that in my heart they linger on”

Those lines were extraordinarily powerful that meant allot to him and the people who read it.

Overall this was a very honest poem about how the author had a strong connection with Stephan and how he misses’s him. One message passed on from the sonnet is that true things or people can never really be lost and will always be a part of you.