Bashirs blog: this was a very memorable blog post because it was so detailed and you could tell right away that lots of effort was put into it. And I also feel like his blog is only made to satisfy his teacher but to satisfy himself and in a way I think enjoyed writing this. I can really hear his voice in this piece and reading this piece really made me smile. Here is one example from the text ‘I can relate to Nina in this situation in the fact that I don't accept how I quit a lot of things. I remember in 5th grade I played the saxophone and I was really bad at it so I quit. And I had a period of time where I quit skating but I went back. I also relate to Nina how I now do accept that I quit things and can go back to my normal life. I think that if you don't accept the truth it will drown you and you will keep’
Sumiyas blog: I liked her blog because it was very detailed and really explained he thoughts. I like how she was just honest about her piece which I find is ‘rare’. Her elaboration was great. I will defiantly continue reading her blog posts.
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